Question

Acest text e facut de mine pentru engleza . Imi puteti spune daca este corect . Am avut de povestit o calatorie intr-un oras .

I went to Paris last year in my journey round the world.
I got up at 7am to have time to walk on the streets of Paris . I left the hotel at 8 am to go to Eiffel Tower . On the way to the tourist attraction i bought some souvenirs for my friends . A lot of people was waiting in line when I arrived there . While I was climb the tower's stairs , I made photos . The view was incredible . The Eifell Tower it's amazing .
At lunch time I ate some french specialty food at a restaurant .

After lunch , I went to Luvru museum . The weather was good. It was a clear day . I visited museum's galleries and I made a lot of photos for memories . After that I walk on the Champs-Elysees Boulevard .
At the end of the day I felt happy because I had the opportunity to visited Paris .

Answer 1

Compunerea ta este corecta