Question

Ajutați ma și pe mine la engleza! Îmi puteți spune dacă am scris bine?

Answer 1

Răspuns:

Joe used to live in a flat in the centre of Birmingham when he was younger. He used to be thin and have long straight hair; he wore ripped jeans and T-Shirts. He would eat junk food in fast food restaurants. He also used to play football and went to lots of parties.

Nowadays, Joe has a large house with a garden in a countryside. He is good-loking and plump. He has short hair and wears expensive suits. Joe now eats steak and grilled fish in expensive(aici daca vrei ai putea zice luxurious ca sa nu mai repeti atata un cuvant) restaurants. In his spare time, he goes to the opera or the theatre.

ai gresit mai mult la expresii, spre exemplu : "he used to has" nu e corect, varianta buna este "he used to have"

sper ca te-am ajutat

Answer 2

Răspuns:

Joe used to live in a flat in the center of Birmingham when he was younger. He used to be thin and have long straight hair; he wore ripped jeans and T-Shirts. He would eat junk food in fast-food restaurants. He also used to play football and went to lots of parties.

Nowadays, Joe has a large house with a garden in the countryside. He is good-looking and plump. He has short hair and wears expensive suits. Joe now eats steak and grilled fish in expensive(aici daca vrei ai putea zice luxurious ca sa nu mai repeti atata un cuvant) restaurants. In his spare time, he goes to the opera or the theatre.

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