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AJUTATI-MA VA ROG SA CORECTEZ ASTA , VA ROG MULT !
It all started with my family when we decided to go on a vacation unusual. I was very entuziastmata because we were just hours away from the trip since last year promised my father, bound for New York. Many rush Storage as cover, crowd, everything you can find in an airport. I told my father 'I waited this long vacation will be wonderful "In all that rush, was close to getting the plane lose so I tried to get faster. But in all agromeratia that I lost my parents. I heard a voice which said, "Embarking in 10 minutes for New York" When I heard that I recognized my mother after her hat and ran behind her to get on the plane. When we arrived, it was not my mother was actually another lady, and I found myself alone in a plane bound for Chicago. I landed, and was singura..dupa many attempts I managed to contact my parents who came after me.

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entuziasmata-excited
fiind in aeroport-being in aeroport
sindura-one
dupa-after

Truelove: Mersi :) timpurile verbale sunt ok?
zambareata: da
zambareata: cred ca la sinfura si dupa nu stiu prea bine daca au timpurile corespunzatoare dar cred ca e ok
zambareata: adauga si tu un multumesc te rog
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It all started with my family when we decided to go on a vacation unusual. I was very entuziasmat because we were just hours away from the trip since last year promised my father, bound for New York. Many rush Storage as cover, crowd, everything you can find in an airport. I told my father 'I waited this long vacation will be wonderful "In all that rush, was close to getting the plane lose so I tried to get faster. But in all aglomeratia that I lost my parents. I heard a voice which said, "Embarking in 10 minutes for New York" When I heard that I recognized my mother after her hat and ran behind her to get on the plane. When we arrived, it was not my mother was actually another lady, and I found myself alone in a plane bound for Chicago. I landed, and was singura..dupa many attempts I managed to contact my parents who came after me.
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