Question

Am nevoie de cineva care stie bine engleza sa-mi corecteze scrisoarea.
Dear Marry,
How are you? It's been a quite long time from the last letter that i sent to you.
Tell me if you want to come and visit my town.We can have fun together.
I want to show you the zoo garden who has recently opened.All the animals are friendly,even the bear.
Another place that i want to show you is the museum.It's far from here,but i think we can make it,we can arive there if we hurry. I have some friends who can take us to there.
I want you to be honest with me if you don't like the places i sugest.You can came with another ideas.Be creative.Think about it.
About the things you can bring, i sugest you to came with a tennis racket because i don't have one and it's possible to go somewere in a foresc with my family.
I'm excited about the visit.I'm looking forward to see you in july.

Answer 1

La zoo nu pui si garden Friends who can take us there, nu to there Places I suggested You can come with other ideas Suggest Come Forest La sfarsit iti recomand sa pui I'm looking forward to seeing you soon pentru ca e mai corect si e o formula de incheiere specifica

Answer 2

Dear Mary,
How are you? It's been  quite a long time from the last letter that I sent to you.
Tell me if you want to come and visit my town.We can have fun together.
I want to show you the zoo  which has recently opened.All the animals are friendly,even the bear.
Another place that I want to show you is the museum.It's far from here,but I think we can make it,we can arrive there if we hurry. I have some friends who can take us  there.
I want you to be honest with me if you don't like the places I suggest.You can come with another ideas.Be creative.Think about it.
About the things you can bring, I suggest you to come with a tennis racket because I don't have one and it's possible to go somewere in a forrest with my family.
I'm excited about the visit.I'm looking forward to seeing you in July.
 
(looking forward to este o expresie)