Question

Am nevoie sa imi spuneti unde sunt greseli in text (in special gramaticale, de exprimare) .

I am writing my opinion about the recent article about the new shopping centre . the new changes are useless , and bring more disadvantages . there will be more jobs but will increase traffic and noise . and the roads and more dangerous , especially for children . It is not normal that problem , protection of children is very important . And with the new changes will after the appearance of the town . The buildings will not look nice and the center would spoil the landscape . I am opposed new decisions , shopping center should not be done , I hope you consider the letter printed .


Vreau sa stiu doar ce modific , a fost tradus pe un site si nah.. . nu scrieti aiurea , primesc nota pe asta :)).

Answer 1

I am writing to you related to the new built shopping center, about which you wrote in your recent article. I agree that this shopping center would bring benefits such as working places. However, it would bring also inconveniences; the traffic would be heavier and would generate car crashes. This area would be so crowded all the time that the children's safety would be jeopardized/endangered. This is an issue that should have been mentioned in the article. On the other hand, the buildings that are to be raised would change the look/appearance of the town. I do not agree with the new changes and I do hope my opinion to be taken into consideration so that the building of new shopping center will not start.