Engleza, întrebare adresată de SCatalin, 9 ani în urmă

Bunaa! Ma ajutati si pe mine putin va rog? Am de facut o scrisoare informala la engleza (Informal letter). Am facut-o , insa nu stiu daca este corect. Ma puteti corecta voi, sa vedeti daca am greseli de exprimare etc ? Si va rog nu cu Google Translate.


Dear, Claudiu
How are you? Hope you're doing well. Sorry for I'm writing to you so late, but I was very busy lately.
First of all , I wish to let you know that I finished school, I passed this exam with a great note and I was chosen to learn at one of the best high schools in the city.
I learn at Constantin Cantacuzino National College. Here it's very nice, our college is very well-equipped but the teachers are so exacting. However I like it a lot.
So I have made many friends lately and I meet a lot of beautiful people. My family is fine. Mom and Dad works hard .
Well, how about you? Write soon and let me know what's new with you. Looking forward to hearing from you.
All the best,
Catalin


Utilizator anonim: Uite una: e Draga Claudiu,
Utilizator anonim: Sorry for I'm writing to you so late ; mai bine scri "I'm sorry if I'm writing you so late"
Utilizator anonim: Si mai sunt...
Utilizator anonim: Mom and Dad works hard .->Mom and dad are working hard.
Utilizator anonim: Etc

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Răspuns de coandacatalina
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Câteva greșeli gramaticale, destul de mici, dacă ai avut-o la un test sau ceva de genul, iei in jur de 9,70-9,80

SCatalin: Nu o am ca tema si ne pune note pe ea !
coandacatalina: E destul de bună, o să iei notă bună.
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