Question

cine poate sa imi verifice daca este drept ce am scris
My summer was a simple summer just as in June we have the exam. I met a Mommy
then I had prom after 2 days I went to sea. the day after we arrived we went to see the great accommodation. Golden Sands beach was beautiful, the water was very blue and very salty sand was hot and small shells. waves beating the shore. A week after I got home. after I spent Mommy airport. serious look on the evening go with friends so all restu months. so I spent the summer

Answer 1

La al 4-lea rand e "Waves" si "After a week i got home"
La al 6-lea "all rest months"

Answer 2

compunerea este destul de buna numai ca:1) (Golden Sands) as inlocui cu  ,,the". Ex: The beach was beautiful , and the water was very.........
In loc de cifra 2 scrie in engleza ,,two". 
2) Nu este deloc neaparat sa scrii cuvintul mommy cu litera mare, doar daca este un nume de familie.
3)Ar fi mult mai corect daca ai scrie: ,,After a week I got home" (trebuia pur shi simplu sa schimbi cuvintele cu locul)