+ conclusion : restate your opinion: computers are an important part of our lives today - help us to work and study more effectively - we shoudn’t spend all of our time in front of a computer screen.
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"Computers are an essential part of our daily lives" - This statement is partly true, but also wrong. Because of computers and many different devices, people have come to sit in one place all day on their device without interacting with the real world.
Today, we use computers and electronics for homework and other things related to work or school. We communicate through these devices, some use their phones to learn and read, but not all. Others use it to play games, use social media, and other stupid things that aren't that important to spend time on.
Using our devices everyday for hours without a small break is very dangerous for our eyes and also health. Phones keep us locked up in our houses, when, in fact we should spend most of our time outside going to different places. Life ends short, so we should make the best of it and explore places that we haven't been to yet. Sure, you can use a phone from time to time, since it's useful for calls and communicating with people that we can't reach out to without the help of our phone
( Nu stiu daca am facut cum trb ca nici nu am mai stat sa citesc cerintele alea din manual. Dar, e doar un exemplu, nu trebuie sa faci exact cum e in carte.)