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Dau Coronă !Am nevoie de o argumentare de 15 rânduri în engleză depre,,Why video games are good for your health’’Prefer ca argumentarea să fie negativă că nu este bine să te joci …….

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In my opinion I believe that video games are not good for the children's health because today, the children use their phones and other technologies in excess. They even say "Oh but i can't survive without my phone! i would die without it!". It's scientifically proven that the light from the phone screen, and not only phone, harms the eyes. Of course, it wouldn't harm the children's health if they would time their time on the phone,but they don't. Also, some children that play too much on their phones get angry, they don't learn at school, and they don't listen to their parents neither.


melissa62: Poți să mai continui ,te rog , am nevoie mai mult ….
forrandomstufff: @melissa62 Doctors say that children of ages 14-18 can spend 4 hours on their phones,maximum,but not continously (adica 4 ore dar nu in continuu). But guess what! Today, children aged 10-13 spend even 6 hours on their phones! Imagine the damage suffered by the eyes! Do you have colleagues in your class that wear glasses? The majority of the students wear glasses because their eyes were harmed by excessive use of the phone/tablet.
melissa62: Poți spune te rog și o concluzie ?
melissa62: Scuze ca te frec la cap ,dar așa vrea profa și ne pune și notă
forrandomstufff: @melisa62 In conclusion, I believe that the video games are harmful and that there should be more advices for parents to watch how much time their children spend on the screen and not only phone, TV as well because every parent should take care of their children's health. -Melissa
forrandomstufff: @melissa62 Acum dacă am făcut câteva greşeli de gramatică,asta e. Te mai poţi verifica. Dar nimeni nu poate avea un text sau compunere fără o greşeală. Mai ales că limba engleză nu este limba maternă. Mult successs, şi să îmi spui dacă aţi primit notă! ❤
melissa62: Mulțumesc mult!O să-ți dau coroana când Brainly mă va lăsa
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