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Degeaba acest site este pentru teme și pentru a ne ajuta dacă eu am postat până acum o compunere și am cerut doar ca ea să fie corectata, deoarece știu ca sunt greșeli gramaticale și nimeni nu s-a obosit sa ma ajute. Mulțumesc!
The last event I attended was the wedding of my uncle, my mother's brother, last fall. In this photo was dressed in a cream-colored dress. I was a bridesmaid, I helped the bride to prepare and participated in all the traditions specific to this event. It was a beautiful day, full of emotions and surprises but can not say the same about morning when I had to get up at five o'clock to go to the hairdresser and makeup. I was standing shoe with a heel neither too large nor too small to be able to stand all day. The party took place at a restaurant. In the evening I wore a blue dress with black shoes. I felt great and I will remember this event because it was special and filled with many emotions.

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The last event I attended was the wedding of my uncle, my mother's brother, last fall. On this occasion I have put a cream-colored dress. I was bridesmaid helped the bride to prepare and participated in all the traditions specific to this event. It was a beautiful day, full of emotions and surprises, but can not say the same morning, when I had to get up at five o'clock to go to the hairdresser and makeup. I was standing on shoes with a heel neither too large nor too small to be able to sit all day. The party took place at a restaurant. In the evening I wore a blue dress with black shoes. I felt great and I will remember this event because it was special and filled with many emotions.

MU ai avut multe greseli, am mai corectat eu unele.. cred ca asa este corect