Question

Formulati o compunere in ENGLEZA care sa inceapa cu " hardly had i heard the phone when"..,,,,,.

Answer 1

Hardly had I heard the phone when my mother entered in my room and she said me that I'm going to lose the school bus because I overslept. I sprang out of the bed and I run to the bathroom, then to the kitchen. I hadn't time to eat. I just comber and dressed and I took my backpack. In 5 minutes I was ready to go, when I saw the bus. I was running out of the house when the bus driver saw me and he braked suddenly. He laughed and he said I was lucky because I was going to lose the bus. But I preferred to call this 'a bad luck'.

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