Question

Imi poate corecta cine compunerea, va rog?
It was great! I spent a whole day in this amusement park, Aquaventure Waterpark Dubai, where tons of water flow, are arranged artificial beaches, spectacular slides, tunnels, water, fast rivers and all kinds of entertainment. I have felt when took eight full hours of adrenaline, the conditions are excellent, everything is arranged carefully, is very clean, you feel safe and have all the comfort you need for a day of splashing continues!

We got there at opening time, I left clothes and worries in the locker room entrance and, armed only with towels, hats and creams to protect us from the sun we started to have fun.
We did about 10 times in River Rides, a fast flowing river has waterfalls, water jets and waves fabulous and I stepped into The Tower of Poseidon, which is ... wow!

The Leap of Faith is a slide tall 28 meters that descend almost vertically and you think you land in a pool full of sharks - when in fact, you're in a transparent tube around which really swim sharks . And here are the slides that slip speed coil by torrents of water and two kilometers from the route you choose whether you want to walk relaxed seat or want to be spun, twisted or scared caves.

It was a great day and it was worth all the money.

Answer 1

dap e ok...dar, ai zis la un momendat ceva de genu: witch is... wow, eu aș zice să schimbi cu beautiful sau amazing, dar poți să lași și așa