Question

Imi puteti spune si mie va rog o parere sincera despre eseul acesta ?
Tema este avantajele si dezavantajele oraselor.

There are plenty of cities around the world and billions of people live in them for their advantages. But what are really the advantages and disadvantages of cities?
The main advantages of living in a city is that you can have access to a high-performance educational system, high quality of medical services, more opportunities for your career that lead to a high salary, meeting with new people from all walks of life who could, through the discussions and experiences lived together to help you form a different perspective on life , the entertainment events for the youngster persons and the public transport
On the other hand, the disadvantages of cities are much more threatening than they seem. Most of the inhabitants of the cities lead a busy life living in the fast line, cities are sound polluted this leading to anxiety and depression, very small living space, very crowded public transport, the air is very polluted and this can lead to lung diseases and last but not least the high crime rate
In conclusion, cities have many advantages and disadvantages, which are much more suitable for young people who build their careers and not for the elderly who no longer want a noisy and noisy life.



Dau coroana celor care imi lasa un comentariu sincer si o posibilitate de imbunatatire.

Answer 1

Răspuns:

Ai facut o treaba minunata imi place tare mult despre cum ai vorbit in acest eseu dar unde scrie

events for youngesr persons nu ai scris bine dar e om așa trebuia:Event for the youngest people

Sper ca te-am ajutat:))