o compunere cu o intamplare reala sau inventata cu cuvintele next ,finally, first ,then si after that ,va rog dau coroana.
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Finally I arrived at my home!I am so tired...I want to sleep,but after to sleep I must to go at the fridge to steal some sweets,but then my mom stops me on the stairs and ask me what am I doing with this sweets!!....I stucked. She was soooooooo angry. My first plan was to run away,but this happened in movies...so my next plan was to bring back all the sweets.I did this. In the morning,I woke up and I met my mom. She wasn"t angry and I thought I escaped,but no....She didn"t speak with me everyday,but is not a catastrophe!
ioana174V:
neh, gresit. In primul rand o poveste de obicei este spusa la trecut fiindca a fost ceva ce deja s-a intamplat. Daca nu scrii a fost asa si asa si apoi s-a intamplat " ghilimele si abia asa poti trece la prezent", mi se pare gresit. Ideea e buna dar are greseli.
Corect ar fi: Finally I got home! I was so tired and I wanted to sleep but before going to sleep I want to go to the fridge and steal all the sweets. Then my mom caught me right at the stairs and asked me what I'm going to do with all the sweets!! I got stuck. She was so angry. My first plan was to run like in movies so my next plan was to give back all the sweets which I did.
The next morning after I woke up I met my mom. She wasn't angry anymore and I thought I escaped but no... she didn't spoke to me all day that day but hey.. that's not a catastrophe!
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