Engleza, întrebare adresată de Foreign, 9 ani în urmă

O compunere despre animalul meu? La alegere animalul, numele, culoarea si restul... Va rog mult!


InnaArkane: cate randuri ?
Foreign: Nu conteaza, cate vrei.

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Răspuns de InnaArkane
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Shadow, my furry kitten

I have always wanted a pet and since I was little I had a thing for cats. A few days ago my father came home with a big box with holes which he was holding with a lot of care. He put the box on the kitchen table and called me downstairs. When I got there I expected him to ask me how I spent my day or if I could go and buy something but instead he took the box and placed it in my hands telling me to be careful with it. When I put it down and opened it what I saw inside left me breathless. Inside the box was curled up and snoring a really tiny kitten It had black fur with a few white patches. I looked up at my father and he said to me that this was my Easter present. I don't remember what my reaction was but since then all I do all day long is to play with my little ball of fur. I decided to call my baby cat Shadow because of it's beautiful dark fur and because the doctor said it's a boy. Shadow it's really playful but also sleeps a lot and in the most awkward times. I remember that yesterday afternoon I was playing with Shadow and I turned my back for a second to turn on the TV and when I turned around to face him again he was sleeping pacefuly and snoring softly. Shadow's favourite food is fish, specificaly tuna but he doesn't want to eat chicken. Right now, while I am writing my homework Shadow is sleeping in my lap. I can't wait untill he wakes up so we could play more. I love Shadow, he is the best kitten. 

Tocmai am scris o compunere despre pisica mea... sper ca iti place! 

Foreign: Mersi mersi mersi! Este superba!
InnaArkane: :* Nici o problema! Sa iei 10!
Geta1955: Cateva mici greseli: box with holes THAT he was holding ("which" se foloseste selectiv); inside the box IT was curled up...; because of ITS beautiful dark.. (it's inseamna it is); Shadow IS really (nu it's really - doua subiecte sunt redundante); poate "awkward hours"; nu exista "pacefuly"... poate "peacefully"; "specifically" inseamna "in mod caracteristic", asa ca in cazul nostru "especially", "specially", "mostly tuna" se potrivesc mai bine; UNTIL (cu un singur L final).
Răspuns de innad2002
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Cat
I have a beautiful and funny cat.He is Pufulet.He s a black and white.I love to play with him. He   often catches mice.

InnaArkane: Asta nu este compunere. Nu a dat o limita de randuri dar puteai sa scrii macar 10
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