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First World War
The First World War took place between July 28, 1914 and November 11, 1918. The outbreak of war was provoked by the assassination of Archduke Franz Ferdinand of Austria, heir to the Austro-Hungarian throne, by Bosnian student Gavrilo Princip in Sarajevo on June 28, 1914. The two politico-military blocs, the Entente and the Central Powers, mobilized quickly, so that a world-wide war would soon break out. The Battle of the Marne (September 5 - September 14, 1914) ended in a victory for Franco-British forces against the German army. This battle proved the failure of the Schlieffen Plan, which was at the root of Germany's strategy for victory in the war against France and, as a result, began the bloody period of the "trench warfare". 1915 was the year in which no camp succeeded in carrying out decisive offensives. Attacks and movement were no longer carried out, but positions were maintained. The Battle of Verdun (February 21, 1916 - December 19, 1916) was also called the "Slaughterhouse" because the number of dead, wounded and missing amounts to 700,000 people. If in Marne in 1914 there was a battle in the classical style, which was clarified in a few days, in Verdun it was the first battle that had all the characteristics of modern warfare. The battle of Verdun was known after the remark "Ils ne passeront pas" (They will NOT pass) attributed to Robert Nivelle. For the French, the Battle of Verdun was, after the Battle of the Marne, the second culmination of World War I. Also, on August 27, 1916, Romania entered the war on the side of the Entente. The US entry into the war on the part of the Entente as well as the events of 1917 were decisive in deciding the fate of the war, although their effects were not fully felt until 1918. Exhausted and crushed, one by one, the countries of the "Central Powers" concluded separate armistices with the Entente in 1918, leading to the end of the war and the opening of the Paris Peace Conference. In conclusion, the "Great War" led to the formation of a Europe of nations and the dissolution of multi-national empires, favoring the emergence of new states or the unification of territories with victorious warring states, but it was also one of the bloodiest events of the 20th century. registering over 10 million victims.​

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world war 1

the world war 1 took place between July 28, 1914 and November 11, 1918. The outbreak of war was provoked by the assassination of Archduke Franz Ferdinand of Austria, heir to the Austro-Hungarian throne, by Bosnian student Gavrilo Princip in Sarajevo on June 28, 1914. The two politico-military blocs, the Entente and the Central Powers, mobilized quickly, so that a world-wide war would soon break out. The Battle of the Marne (September 5 - September 14, 1914) ended in a victory for Franco-British forces against the German army. This battle proved the failure of the Schlieffen Plan, which was at the root of Germany's strategy for victory in the war against France and, as a result, began the bloody period of the "trench warfare". 1915 was the year in which no camp succeeded in carrying out decisive offensives. Attacks and movement were no longer carried out, but positions were maintained. The Battle of Verdun (February 21, 1916 - December 19, 1916) was also called the "Slaughterhouse" because the number of dead, wounded and missing amounts to 700,000 people. If in Marne in 1914 there was a battle in the classical style, which was clarified in a few days, in Verdun it was the first battle that had all the characteristics of modern warfare. The battle of Verdun was known after the remark "Ils ne passeront pas" (They will NOT pass) attributed to Robert Nivelle. For the French, the Battle of Verdun was, after the Battle of the Marne, the second culmination of World War I. Also, on August 27, 1916, Romania entered the war on the side of the Entente. The US entry into the war on the part of the Entente as well as the events of 1917 were decisive in deciding the fate of the war, although their effects were not fully felt until 1918. Exhausted and crushed, one by one, the countries of the "Central Powers" concluded separate armistices with the Entente in 1918, leading to the end of the war and the opening of the Paris Peace Conference. In conclusion, the "Great War" led to the formation of a Europe of nations and the dissolution of multi-national empires, favoring the emergence of new states or the unification of territories with victorious warring states, but it was also one of the bloodiest events of the 20th century. registering over 10 million victims.


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First World War

The First World War took place between July 28, 1914 and November 11, 1918. The outbreak of war was provoked by the assassination of Archduke Franz Ferdinand of Austria, her to the Austro-Hungarian throne, by Bosnian student Gavrilo Princip in Sarajevo on June 28, 1914. The two politico-military buildings, the Entente and the Central Powers, mobilized quickly, so that a world-wide war would soon break out. The Battle of the Marne (September 5 - September 14, 1914) ended in a victory for Franco-British forces against the German army. This battle proved the failure of the Schlieffen Plan, which was at the root of Germany's strategy for victory in the war against France and, as a result, began the bloody period of the "trench warfare". 1915 was the year in which no camp succeeded in carrying out decisive offensives. Attacks and movement we're no longer carried out, but positions were maintained. The Battle of Verdun (February 21, 1916 - December 19, 1916) was also called the "Slaughterhouse" because the number of dead, wounded and missing amounts to 700,000 people. If in Marne in 1914 there was a battle in the classical style, which was clarified in a few days, in Verdun it was the first battle that had all the characteristics of modern warfare. The battle of Verdun was known after the remark "Ils ne passeront pas" (They will NOT pass) attributed to Robert Nivelle. For the French, the Battle of Verdun was, after the Battle of the Marne, the second culmination of World War I. Also, on August 27, 1916, Romania entered the war on the side of the Entente. The US entry into the war on the part of the Entente as well as the events of 1917 were decisive in deciding the fate of the war, although their effects were not fully felt until 1918. Exhausted and crushed, one by one, the countries of the "Central Powers" concluded separate armistices with the Entente in 1918, leading to the end of the war and the opening of the Paris Peace Conference. In conclusion, the "Great War" lead to the formation of a Europe of nations and the dissolution of multi-national empires, favoring the emergence of new states or the unification of territories with victorious warring states, but it was also one of the bloodiest events of the 20th century. registering over 10 million victims.​

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