Question

Please correct my grammatical lyst, so there is no grammatical mistake:

Va rog frumos sa imi corectati corect gramatical acesta compunere,sa nu fie nicio greseala gramaticala :

Hi! My name is Mariana, I'm from the town of Barlad, a small town, but very cheerful. I am currently studying at the high school, Alexandru Ioan Cuza in Barlad. In my spare time I like to walk with friends and play Counter-Strike Global Offensive, Grand Theft Auto San Andreas and The Forest. I can say that I am a sociable, friendly and devoted person. In the future I would like to attend medical school in Iasi because my sister is a doctor and inspires me. I consider myself a good person who understands people's mistakes, I am an open person. I have two favorite seasons: winter and summer. I train at a football club "Zimbru Barlad" I play as a defensive midfielder and I love this position. Although I don't practice them at the performance level, I've tried to keep myself fit and have fun by these means. I think there are some situations where I am extremely upset, especially when I am right, but my opinion is rejected. About my city I can say guaranteed that it is a small town, with beautiful, respectful and serious people. I like to listen to music when I play on PC or when I do the job through the garden, I usually like to listen to different types of music like: rap , manele (very rarely), dubstep, etc. . My favorite artists are: Snoop Dogg, Chelu, Edy Talent, Killa Fonic, Borgore, Marshmello. As hobbies would be cycling and also gaming. I do not practice a high level gaming, hurtce the game that allows me PC.

Answer 1

Răspuns:Din cate am vazut nu ai nicio greseala gramaticala, daca este inseamna ca nu am vazut eu bine.Nu ma raportati nu fac asta pt puncte!

Answer 2

Hi!My name is Mariana.Im from the town Barland , its a small town , but is very cheerful. Im currently studying at the Alexandru Ioan Cuza high school.In my spare time i like walking with my friends and play Counter-Strike Global Offensive , Grand theft Auto San Andreas and also The Forest.I can say that im a sociable , friendly and devoted person. In the future i would like to attend  medical school in Iasi bc my sister is a doctor and inspires me..... Sorry i didnt have time to do everything hopefully is good enough.