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Poate cineva sami spuna daca textul are greseli si daca da poate sa il corecteze?
,,The Book
I was looking thought some of my grandfather old books,when, one of them opened itself in my hand and a strong light coming from inside and filled the room.In a minute, when I woke up, I was no longer in my grandfather's library. I was in a magical realm, where unicorns ran on the hills with hamsters riding on them. There was no bird in the sky, they were flyingNyan Cats. The sun shone brightly with its blue light that highlighted the bright green sky. On the yellow grasshamstersgrazed and the unicorns went to the rainbow spring to drink. I also went to graze with the hamsters, but they wanted to bite me. I jumped on an unicorn and I galloped. In an hour I arrived in a town. I met Nella, the princess knight playing with her friends. I wondered if she can help me get back to my ugly and polluted world. Then her answer would surely want to try because it sounds fun. Then she says something like “I have the heart of iron, it's time to be the knight princess”. At that time her dress disappeared and an armor appeared. I asked her what we do now and in the next second she hit my head with the shield. I could have fainted but when I woke up I was back in the library. It was only a dream .... NO ... it still hurts my head from the shield. Since that day, I have never looked at Nella knight princess.,,

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grandfather's old books* 
strong light came* 
on the sky*
she said something like* 

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