Question

Prepare to write a composition.
a) You are going to write about transport in your home area.Number the steps below in the order in which you would do them.
-check my grammar,spelling and punctuation
-write down lots of ideas
-make a plan,including an introduction and a conclusion
-write a first draft of my composition
-select and order the ideas I want to use and make notes
-check that each paragraph has a main idea (in a topic sentence) and good supporting details
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Answer 1

Hello, I’m Sara. Welcome to my journal! Today I will write about my transport from school to home. So we’re gonna start with the bus I take and the bus route.
So my home is near the mall, so the bus station is very close to my house. I’m waiting 10 minutes for the bus to come. In the main time, I’m going to the nearest pastry and getting a tart with chocolate. This takes like 5 minutes. Then I’m going back to the bus station. While I’m waiting,
I’m eating my tart. Then, when the bus comes, I’m packing it and putting it in my school backpack. So from my home to school are 15 minutes. That’s not important right now. So the route is: mall; grocer Store; Magnolia’s Street and then my school!
Now. The main problem.. My school to bus station. I can say, it’s not that really close. I have to walk 2 kilometres up there. Wich is too much to walk. In the summer is not a problem. But when is winter. Then I can say. I’m dead.
So from my school to home, it takes 20 minutes.
This is the route: school, Magnolia Street; Police station; pastry; market and mall.
So this is much pretty it. This was my route from home to school.
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