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Salut!Spuneti-mi daca urmatorul text in engleza este corect din punct de vedere gramatical.Va rog sa omiteti faptul ca alineatele nu sunt puse correct.Multumesc.

The Environment

Our planet has borned 4.6 billion years ago.
Since its appearing, the Earth's history was marked by important events like:the formation of the oceans, the apparition of life and the extinction of dinosaurs.
However, the Earth is still a good place to live even if people are polluting it in many ways which destroy the environment.
Firstly, every person on this planet doesn't really care about recycling, the ozone layer, and environment in general.
A good example it would be The Great garbage patch which is an island of trash.This island formed gradually as a result of ocean or marine pollution gathered by oceanic currents.
Secondly, the ozone layer is thinning because of the carbon dioxide produced by cars and factories all over the world.
Moreover the carbon dioxide produce a greenhouse effect which affects people, animals and plants.
The icecaps will melt, and the level of the oceans will grow, flooding the land
Thirdly, countries should take measures against pollution like:replacing the trash brought to a recycling factory or replacing the regular cars with elecctric cars.
The town halls should pay more money for the cleaning of the cities
In conclusion, if we take care of the environment, not just the animals and the plants will have a better life but also humanity

Answer 1

La inceput e our planet was born.

Answer 2

E bine,ai omis niste ''.''