Question

Va rog sa cititi aceasta scrisoare si sa scrieti unde e gresit .
I just came from a very nice vacation. I visited a wonderful place in the world and saw many wonderful places. I was with family and my cousin. There we had fun and we enjoyed this beautiful place in Palma de Mallorca.
We stayed at a hotel located near the sea, and the people there were very respectful. From the room you could see the sea and breathtaking scenery in that town. There have many activities you could swim and visit all the places in town. Evening on the beach was music, and tourists had fun and enjoyed every moment. We visited a large castle Bellver Castle where they were put old coins, furniture and interesting city map of Mallorca.
For me it was a great holiday because we had the opportunity to visit many fascinating places and meet wonderful people. For me Mallorca city is a place where you can get all the beautiful moments. There are wonderful places, and if I get the chance I will return there anytime. I hope to have the opportunity to visit and you will not regrind.

Answer 1

dupa parera mea totul e corect