Question

Vă rog să îmi corectați textul acesta :))
"One morning he went down for the train and was unpleasantly surprised when he saw so many people running hurriedly. None of them had a smile, they seemed very sad. I passed by and smiled at them, but I was staring with impressed sadness. I felt very guilty. These people were influencing me negatively ... I got home and I was going to cry. I did not understand why people do not know how to smile and live their lives differently, not just running daily ..."

Answer 1

1.In primul rand ai probleme cu persoanele. Mai intai zici "he" apoi zici "I".
2.One morning he went to take the train. Nu poti folosi expresia "went down". Sau zici pur si simplu he took the train.
3. Asta cu running hurriedly nu e ok. Poti sa zici "he saw many people hurrying"
4. "Impressed sadness" nu are sens. Inlocuieste cu altceva.
5. "negatively" vine in fata lui "influencing". Nu e ca in romana
6. "running daily" nu are sens aici. Stiu ca ai vrut sa zici ca "oamenii sunt mereu pe fuga" dar nu asta reiese. As inlocui ultima fraza cu asta:

I did not understand why people don't know how to smile and actually live their lives, instead of working hard and hurry all the time...

7. Atentie un pic pe la timpurile pe care le folosesti. "I was going to cry" e oarecum corect dar nu imi suna foarte bine. :)