Engleza, întrebare adresată de Iolasd2, 9 ani în urmă

Va rog sa-mi corectati aceasta compunere, si sa-i mai aduceti si voi ceva imbunatatiri sa fie putin mai lunga, multumesc.
If I were a butterfly I would fly around the town where I would live because I would want to see the town to high( aici am vrut sa spun ca as vrea sa vad orasul de sus, nu stiu daca m-am exprimat corect), another way if I were a butterfly is that I would have wings this would be awesome, I think that I were a butterfly, I would learn another language, way to conversation used butterflies, that would be awesome.

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Răspuns de bianca12301
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If i were a butterfly I would fly around the town and I would live there because I would love to watch the town from high especially at night ! Another way if I were a butterfly is that I would have beautiful and colorful wings. Probably I would learn a new language. I think that would be very interesting and funny!

Nu a fost foarte greșita compunerea ta, doar ți-am adăugat niște chestii, sper să-ți placa !:)

Iolasd2: Da, e ok, multumesc de ajutor.
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