Question

VA ROOOG SA MA AJUTATI ,NU E ATAT DE GREU PE CAT E CERINTA DE LUNGA,SUNT SIGURA, DAR NU MA DESCURC, VA ROOOOG !!!
1.Read a student's description of her grandmother and her teacher's comments below .Using them and your imagination , rewrite the composition to make it more interesting .



"A person I admire
A person I admire very much is my grandmother
She is about sixty-five. She is quite tall with grey hair and a nice voice .She's always good fun to be with.The reason I admire her is because she always does what she likes .She doesn't care what other people think.I like that."



Comments
Give more details
-Is your grandmother your father's or your mother's mother? Is your grandfather still alive?
-Does your grandmother look older or younger than her age?
-Is her hair thick or thin?Is it long or short? Is it natural or permed?
-What sort of voice is 'a nice voice' ? Is it deep or soft? Does your grandmother laugh a lot?
-Why is she 'good fun to be with'?What sort of things does she say or do?
-In what way does she 'do what she likes'?
Give an exemple of why you admire what she does

Answer 1

"A person I admire
A person I admire very much is my grandmother. She is my mother's mother. My grandfather died two years ago, when he was about seventy years old. My grandmother is about sixty-five years old, but she looks younger. If you saw her on the street, you'd say she's about sixty years old. She is quite tall with long hair that is grey an very thin. Her hair is so natural. She is allways so happy and she laughs a lot, with a soft and nice voice that is so melodious. She is allways good fun to be with because she makes jokes all the time. The reson I admire her is because she allways does what she likes. She does what she likes in a very simple way and she makes everything to seem so simple. I admire what she does because she does allways good thing for others. She is such a good person an she doesn't what other people think and I like that. For me, she is a source of inspiration."