Question

Vreau sa stiu daca am greseli gramaticale in aceasta compunere despre emisiunea preferata!
My favourite tv show it's Poftiti pe la noi! Poftiti si daruiti! It's a tv show where some public people, tv stars go in different cities and work at stores and factory to help a social case! The tv stars earn money as a result for they'r work and donate all of them to the people that need them! It is quite funny because in the show it's a tv host that supervise them and often because they aren't used to work so hard he drawl them in a funny way! It is also funny that the stars need to make different works maybe in a farm or somewhere where are animals and do things that they never do! At least when the time for the case it is over they make a family happy, renovate the family house and help with the money that they earned!

Answer 1

Eu am gasit niste greseli... Am pus in paranteza ce e incorect, si am scris cu MAJUSCULE ce ar trebui sa fie acolo ca sa fie corect. My favourite tv show (it's) IS Poftiti pe la noi! Poftiti si daruiti! It's a tv show where some (public) FAMOUS people, tv stars go (in) TO different cities and work at stores and (factory) FACTORIES sau: A FACTORY  to help a social case! The tv stars earn money as a result for (they'r) THEIR work and donate all of (them) IT to the people that need (them) IT ! It is quite funny because in the show (it's) THERE IS a tv host that (supervise) SUPERVISES them and often because they aren't used to (work) WORKING so hard he (drawl) <-NU STIU CE VREI SA ZICI them in a funny way! It is also funny that the stars need to (make different works) DO DIFFERENT TASKS maybe (in) ON a farm or somewhere where THERE are animals and do things that they never do! At least when the time for the case (it) <-FARA IT is over they make a family happy, renovate the  si restul pana la final e corect