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Write a narrative essay beginning like this:

"It was raining heavily in Hill Market. Under the entrance of a tall building, a group of people were gathered, shaking the water off their clothes and peering out at the rain. One man, however, did not seem to care about the dreadful weather."

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Răspuns de hajunikol
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This kind of weather did not bother him. He liked the rain. He met his bestfriend, Joey, in the rain. The rain reminded him about this. He lost his dog in the rain. His feelings were mixed. He felt happy and sad in the same time. However, he remained calm. He wanted to smile and cry because of those memories. This man was looking at the group of people who were gathered there. He asked them why are they afraid of rain. He said that "the rain looks like tears. Tears from god. He is crying because we are not appreciating what we have, what he gives us. This weather brings me joy and sadness.". I think that they were moved by his words and he made them realize that they should appreciate every moment of their life. One by one, got in the rain, leaving the entrance of the building. They started dancing, smiling and singing. For that men, this moment will be another of his rain memories that made him happy. *Hope you like it. If you dont, I can write a different one*

Minecraftstuck: Can you do one without kisses or love? This is for my exam and my teacher judges our essays
Minecraftstuck: homework*
Minecraftstuck: a man that really doesnt care of the life, a joyful and a happy man
Minecraftstuck: :)
hajunikol: yeah, i can. but it is not ok if she judges your imagination. im going to change a few more sentences. hope the rest of it is ok
Minecraftstuck: yes it is! Thanks a lot! :))))
Minecraftstuck: and yes i know it's not correct to judge our imagination, but that's our teacher and i cant risk it
hajunikol: i think that she does not have what to say about this anymore, except good things
hajunikol: the beggining of this essay made me sad and i decided that i should keep it sad and put a happy ending
Minecraftstuck: ok
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