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Write a narrative essay ending like this:
"She resisted the urge to wave.To acknowledge them was to make them real."
WRITE YOUR STORY IN 150-180 WORDS AND GIVE IT AN APPROPIATE TITLE. PAY ATTENTION TO THE FOLLOWING:
•you dont need to write long descriptions;
•use dialogues only if they are relevant to your characters or events;
•you should use this plan:
1.Introduction(pharagraph 1-set the scene)
2.Main Body(pharagraph(s) 2/3-develop the story)
3.Conclusion(pharagraph 4 -end the story)
DON'T COUNT THE GIVEN ENDING.

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Răspuns de Ratusca90Isteata
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Răspuns: The Great Tsunami

In a sunny day, Mary and her friends, Danny, Anne and Tom sat at the beach. Everything was fine, everyone was having fun. Nothing could have ruin this hot day.

As I’ve said before, every single person was doing great. Until, Mary has noticed a wave, but not a regular one. It was quite bigger than every other wave, so she asked her friends what it could be. Tom looked in shocked at the so-said “big wave” and mumbled: “Oh no. It may be a tsunami”. Everyone was confused and staring at the “wave” getting even bigger and closer. Everyone, even the surfers ran after seeing so many fish , seahorses and jellyfish raining from the Tsunami.

“How could this happen?” “What could have made such a thing?” “Why is it so big?” were some of the most asked questions by people . Danny, Anne and Tom ran too, but Mary. She just sat there and waited for the Tsunami to go. Her friends and relatives shouted “Mary!” “Mary!” “Watch out, Mary!”.

The wave finally hitted the city and stopped raising. Everyone thought she already died. But, at their surprise, she was ... alive?! Nobody would believe such a thing. How could such a little girl like Mary survive such a Tsunami, with such many living creatures falling from it? Surprisingly, she really survived the fish and especially the wave. “How?” was a question that’s never been answered.

Explicație:

sincer n-am explicatie dar sper din toata inimioara mea ca v-am ajutat pe dumneavoastra si copilul vostru aveti o seara placuta! :D


Ratusca90Isteata: imi cer scuze daca e prea lung
gabita1980: Multumesc frumos!Ce nu am inteles eu,au fost cele două propoziții care s-au dat ca și sfârșit de eseu.Adica"She reziste the urge to wave.To acknowledge them was to make them real."Adica "Ea a rezistat la nevoia de a face cu mâna.Sa le" conștientizeze (recunoasca)a fost sa le faca reale."La cele două propoziții trebuia sa adaug un text+titlu.Dar eseul este foarte fain.Multumesc frumos.
gabita1980: Eseul facut de tine este foarte frumos!
Ratusca90Isteata: Sincer nici eu n-am inteles ce a vrut sa insemne aia, dar multumesc mult si cu multa placere!
gabita1980: Si eu!!!
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