Write a Short story with the title:"A Lucky Escape"
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A lucky escape
I was in a dark room and it seemed like time stopped. I was very scared so I just waited for something to happen.
When I thought I was going to die starving and staying there without a drink, a weird shape appeared. I realised it was actually a witch. And not any kind of witch. A voodoo one. So I thought it was done with me. But she started talking like nothing happened. She actually said she was forced to do that or she'll die. I found out that she was about 12 just like me. When we started talking about how we could escape, something weird happened. 'Again?' I said nervous. She told me that her supervisor is going to come. We sneaked past the wall and found a secret door. Just in the moment in which I wanted to open it, a man in a black cape appeared and started to treathen us with a gun. So we thought fast and ran away through the door like wind. But you know, the man was following us so we suddenly changed our minds to find a better solution. I found a covered place and hid behind the curtain. We waited for him to get past us. He did. So we could afford making some noise, right? We found a door and opened it without any kind of fear of the one on our path. Then we heard him again, shooting and threatening us, and then he swore and grabbed the curtain. We quickly went through the door and there was a portal. The man was stuck, though, because he couldn't fit there. We went through the portal and arrived on Earth again! Yay! We escaped safely!
I hope that's okay and it's not too long. Thanks for making time to read this and hopefully I don't have any spelling mistakes. Crown maybe? I don't want to obey but please :))
I was in a dark room and it seemed like time stopped. I was very scared so I just waited for something to happen.
When I thought I was going to die starving and staying there without a drink, a weird shape appeared. I realised it was actually a witch. And not any kind of witch. A voodoo one. So I thought it was done with me. But she started talking like nothing happened. She actually said she was forced to do that or she'll die. I found out that she was about 12 just like me. When we started talking about how we could escape, something weird happened. 'Again?' I said nervous. She told me that her supervisor is going to come. We sneaked past the wall and found a secret door. Just in the moment in which I wanted to open it, a man in a black cape appeared and started to treathen us with a gun. So we thought fast and ran away through the door like wind. But you know, the man was following us so we suddenly changed our minds to find a better solution. I found a covered place and hid behind the curtain. We waited for him to get past us. He did. So we could afford making some noise, right? We found a door and opened it without any kind of fear of the one on our path. Then we heard him again, shooting and threatening us, and then he swore and grabbed the curtain. We quickly went through the door and there was a portal. The man was stuck, though, because he couldn't fit there. We went through the portal and arrived on Earth again! Yay! We escaped safely!
I hope that's okay and it's not too long. Thanks for making time to read this and hopefully I don't have any spelling mistakes. Crown maybe? I don't want to obey but please :))
danna10:
Cu placere! BTW (btw inseamna by the way daca nu stii), am avut si eu asta. Dar poti sa renunti la niste secvente
Excelentă compunere, Danna 10! În afară de vreo 2 abateri de la corespondența timpurilor, e o lucrare mai mult decât perfectă :)
Multumesc mult pentru apreciere Le0nard! :))
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