Write a story about a Police detective.
Turn the story into Passive.
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Detective Alice was a young lady that helped with the investigation of murders. In her opinion they were easy to resolve as the killer would mindlessly leave evidence everywhere. The thing that was driving her to solve every case wasn't necessarily that she had any compassion for the victims, but that she had a thirst for justice.
Though one day, one of the murders was a bit complicated. They have found only one arm on the victim and it seemed like someone had biten into it. There wasn't a head but the fingers were still there. It was a was a doctor. Considering the murder took place in a hospital , Alice and her team looked in the security cameras only to find a blurry black figure with a little red on it coming from the room in which the murder was commited. They followed the figure until they observed it went outside, then disappeared as the camera glitched. Alice went outside , finding a trashcan that wasn't presented on the camera. She actually searched in it and what would you know, there was a reddish chainsaw and a black cloak that looked as if a tomato chef was wearing it. Alice couldn't find any fingerprints on the chainsaw but she did on the cloak , which helped them identify the murderer. She called other more specialised doctors to recognise the fingerprints. Shocked , they noticed it was a child's. They were blank faced. They tracked the kid down and when they went where he lived, they found him crying on the floor with a few bodies beside him. They though the child killed them , but no. It was the other victim. The doctor.
It was horifing . Alice didn't have any words. They got the child to an adoption center where they paid him through child therapy. Though the case was done, The child's instability wasn't.
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