Question

write an email addressed to your teacher. In the message ask the teacher to see the draft variant of your essay and give feedback so that you can improve your writing skills.

Answer 1

To: [email protected]

Subject: Improving my skills

Hello, Mrs Sullivan,

I'm writing to tell you about my homework at your English class, the essay.

I wrote the essay, but I am not sure about it if it's complete. Can I send you the draft and maybe have a look? I really want to improve my writing skills and also my grades. It would be great if you can say an opinion about it.

Thank you very much for your time.

Your student,

Jhonny