Question

Writing a report
You have just finished your first term at university in student accommodation. The university has asked you to write a report about your experience.
Your report should describe your accommodation, explain any problems you have had, and suggest any future improvements that could be made.
Write your report. Write 220-260 words.
Until tomorrow please

Answer 1

Hi, my first term in student accommodation was great, the students were kind and the teachers understood my problems sometimes, but there were some problems, a few people made jokes about the way i look and my hair colour, they also told me that i was fat and needed to go on a diet, i didn’t really take it personal but i needed to tell you this, and also when i was feeling sick one of the teachers told me to stop faking it and that i made it up and they didn’t let me go home. I suggest that in the future you should allow to let students be absent for a day if they feel sick. You should also have a little talk with the students and try to tell them that it is not okay to make fun of how other people look, you should give students more detention if they bully other students, please fix the way students think, it will help our university reputation go up

i wrote 171 words or something like that but i dont really know what to write more

Answer 2

Răspuns:

• I have just finished my first term at university and have been living in student accommodation. I have found my student accommodation to be quite satisfactory. The accommodation has been clean and comfortable, but there are some areas that could be improved.
• One problem I have had is with the noise level. It can be quite loud at night, and there have been a few occasions where I have not been able to get to sleep. I think the walls could be thicker, or there could be some kind of soundproofing installed.
• Another issue is with the communal areas. They are not always very clean, and there is often rubbish left around. I think there should be more bins provided, and maybe some cleaning staff could come in more often.
• In terms of future improvements, I think it would be helpful if the student accommodation had a better Wi-Fi connection. Additionally, it would be nice to have a TV in the room, but this is not a necessity.
• Overall, I have enjoyed my experience in student accommodation. It has been a great way to meet new people and make friends. I think with a few improvements, it could be even better.