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Your english teacher has asked u to write a story.Youre story must begin with this sentence ,,I couldn t belive it when i opened the door"


burceastefanandrei: Cum adica? ;)
burceastefanandrei: Nici chiar horror
burceastefanandrei: Sa fie cat de cat
burceastefanandrei: trb sa fie propozitia aia prima cu care incepi
burceastefanandrei: Am nevoie sa fie de min 80-90 de cuv

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Răspuns de Outstanding
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    I couldn`t believe it when I opened the door,on the other side of my room,  a strange man was standing, starring at me. At first, I was very scared, I couldn`t move,  couldn`t scream, I couldn`t do anything. When he started talking, I came to my senses, because he had an incredibly soft voice, in total contrast with his appearance. He told me that he had seen me the other day when I had saved a little kitten from being killed by a dog and I had taken it into the house, even my mum is still very angry with me. He asked me to make a wish, as a reward. I had been taken by surprise, I didn`t know what to ask, but finally I remembered that my mother had just been out of her job and she needed a new one. I knew it was too much to ask, but I bit the bullet and I said it loud and clear. The strange man said that I was  very good-hearted, that he would fulfill my wish and he dissapeared like he had never been there. The next day, my mum found a great job and we were all very happy. I still think that man was my guardian angel.

Succes!


Leonard: @Outstanding, încearcă să editezi aici două mici scăpări:
1. "a strange man was standing, starring at me" (topica frazei)
2. " I couldN`T move, couldn`t scream"
Leonard: Lasă scris în comentarii dacă ţi-a expirat timpul de editare şi rezolvăm altfel.
Outstanding: Multam! Am corectat, sunt aiurita uneori si fac greseli,imi pare rau...
Leonard: Ca noi toţi, nu e nicio problemă. Succes şi mulţumim mult pentru aportul tău pe site!
Outstanding: Multumesc,la fel!
burceastefanandrei: Multumec mult!!!
Outstanding: Cu drag!
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