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am nevoie sa corectati uramatorul text cat de repede posibil:
Terra cry

Why do you think Terra cry? You don’t see? We destroyed and destroy all!
Firstly, althought many people see Terra like ”Blue planet”, but this planet became gray thanks to pollution, thanks to water pollution, thanks to people. From negligence started all.
In recent years due to global warming caused many climate change. That is why our planet, Earth, crying. We all think about the lively nature, the animals in our forests, the dolphins in the sea and horrified us that these climate changes ruining their way of life.
Dirty water is the world's biggest health risk, and continues to threaten the life and public health. So , if you were indifference with Earth, you were indifference with you, with your health.
In conclusion, should we have a clean planet, a clean home, but that is impossible,no? No! Is possible with persons which believe in change.

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Răspuns de Rawan
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Terra cries


Why do you think Terra cries? You don’t see? We destroyed and destroy all!
 Althought many people see Terra like the  ”Blue planet”, but this planet became gray because of pollution, because of  water pollution,because of  people. From negligence started all.
In recent years due to global warming caused many climate changes. That is why our planet, Earth,  is crying. We all think about the lively nature, the animals in our forests, the dolphins in the sea and horrified us that these climate changes ruining their way of life. 
Dirty water is the  biggest health risk of the world and continues to threaten the life and public health. So , if you were indifference with Earth, you were indifference with you, with your health.
In conclusion, should we have a clean planet, a clean home, but that is impossible,right? No! It is possible with persons which believe in change.


nutellam3ow: n.ar fi mai ok daca as spune - Terra does cry .. in loc de Terra cries?
Rawan: daca titlul e interogatie, atunci poti pune"Does Terra cry?", daca nu e interogatie, atunci lasi "Terra cries"pentru ca e prezentul si nu se pune niciodata "does cry", doar in interogatii se foloseste auxiliarul"do"cu formele specifice persoanei.
nutellam3ow: ok, multumesc mult de tot
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