Question

As vrea sa stiu daca am facut compunerea bine la engleza,va rog ...
I remember a wonderful day with teachers and other students. We gathered all in class in which was held activity organized by english teacher. The service woman helped her with carrying devices. Just he knows : ''If you don't work hard ,you will be fired'' .This thing was written in a book that had a cover with a pen and a bottle on ink. At this activity ,I invited my best friend. If she had walked faster, she would have arrrived before the bell rang. She must present a documentary about ''the pollution of our Planet'' .We celebrated National Day of Romania in a different way to the other schools. Children of the english teacher made drawing on white paper, our country with Giurgiu city and America country with Los Angeles city .If I were them place I would have dressed as a policeman with wolfdog. On the white board was a picture with Romanian sea and America oceans. The teacher told me, she would attach magnets with fish if she had enough space. I said her ''I would bring a book with romanian recipes and english recipes
I will participate if I will be invited!

Answer 1

la  : helped her with carrying devices  -  corect ar fi : helped her to carry the devices 
Bottle on ink -corecţie: bottle of ink
in a different way to the other schools - corecţie: in a different way than other schools
În rest e bun!