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Este bine scrisa?Daca nu, puteti sa-mi spuneti unde este gresit?
The role of the motion and health is very important and every town has gyms available for people to use. Nevertheless, how many of us are taking care of their lifestyle?
One point of view in favour of keeping fit is that it helps maintain a balanced weight. This is important because if a person goes far beyond the normal limit of weight can have many health problems. Therefore, keeping fit means that you are able to do more activities easily. For example ,people who have the normal weight can do more activities without getting tired immediately.Finally, the motion helps at maintaining a healthy body.
However, there are also some disadvantages. One disadvantage is that keeping fit can be expensive. Another disadvantage is that it is often difficult to fit exercise into our hectic lifestyles, because the work schedule is loaded.
All things considered, some moderate exercise every day has a great number of benefits.

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it helps maintaining a balanced weight. 
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