Question

Mă poate ajuta cineva cu corectarea unei compuneri la engleză? Are cam 190 de cuvinte și trebuie să o trimit până astăzi la ora 23:59. Vreau să fiu sigur că am făcut-o corect. Vă rog frumos!
Compunerea:
Dear John

I've got some great news. I think I’ve found the right house for you.

The location is where I grew up. It is a beautiful and quiet area and the neighbors are very friendly. The house is about a kilometer from the forest. Also, the price for the house is only 10,000

The house has two floors, it’s a medium-sized house and has a large yard. The house is orange with a red roof and the windows are double glazed and the doors are the same. There are flowers and two small trees in front of the house. There is plenty of free space behind the house for various activities. The house also has a garden and an orchard.

The interior of the house is cool. On the ground floor there is a living room, a kitchen, a bedroom and a bathroom. Upstairs there are two bedrooms, a bathroom and a small terrace. The house is fully furnished. The living room is quite large and the kitchen is equipped with all modern apparatus.

The owner is my uncle, I can talk to him for you. I hope to see you soon.

Your

Sam

Answer 1

Răspuns:

ai putea spune

AT THE GROUND FLOOR....

Apparatures

Fac engleza de doi ani si din puntul meu de vedere,acelea sunt singurele greșeli

Sper că te-am ajutat

Answer 2

Singura greseala pe care am gasit-o ar fi la sfarsit. In loc sa spui “your Sam” cred ca e mai bine “yours, Sam”