Question

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Write an opinion essay (150-170 words).
People should pay for each bag of rubbish they throw away. What is your opinion?
PLAN:
Step 1 Plan
Decide your opinion. Why do you think it's a good or a bad idea? Make notes.
Step 2 Write
Write your first draft. Organize your essay into three paragraphs.
Step 3 Check
Check your writing for errors. Have you used linkers from the Language focus?
Step 4 Write
Write your final copy and hand in your work.
POINTS RATING:
-expressing oppinion -4 points
-organizing paragraphs-2 points
-using linkers-2 points
-grammar correctness-1 point
-lengh (number of words)-1 point
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Answer 1

In my opinion pollution is a big problem nowadays so people should understand this and every bag or piece of plastic they throw on the ground should be paid for by themselves.
First of all, plastic is very difficult to degrade in nature and due to its resistance and its presence in so many products, the pollution has spread so much. The climate and the animals are the most affected by this and the earth suffers a lot because of people's unconsciousness.
Secondly, because of the commodity with which people have come to live, it seems much easier to throw garbage on the street, in water, in forests, etc. than in a trash can, where they could be reused, which ones can be reused, or thrown away again in a special place. However, in addition to climate and the animals, the people are also directly affected by pollution, because oxygen and the ozone layer also have to suffer.
In conclusion, I agree that people should pay for every waste thrown on the street because maybe this way, many of them will stop.