Question

Salut . Am de facut o compunere, o poveste.. ( aprox 10-15 randuri ) cu aceste cuvinte :
dragon , chicken , cupboard , heady long ,monostary .


Daca puteti sa bagati si cateva greseli gramaticale ( sa nu si dea seama ca am copiat de undeva , si sa mi spuneti unde este gresit ) ca sunt bata la engleza.. :'(
Va rog .. ajutor

Answer 1

,,There once was a hero named Ragnar the Red,who came running to Whiterun from old Rorikstead.
He sometimes came down to clashings of steel as he met shieldmaiden Matilda who was in full of ziel.
Ragnar the Red let out a large roar,as his ugly red head rolled around on the floor.,,
That was the poem that a great adventurer once wrote,he had a large backpack with him. In his search for clues about dragons, he had travelled to Whiterun,the city of Dragons. What he found was an astonishing find,dragonite. Dragonite is Dragon excrement,used in forging weapons,armor and besieging tools.
He came across the Emperor,which told him what dragonite's value is. It was a large price to pay,so he had to come back later to buy it,when he makes a bit of money. Fortunately,he knew of a dragon's nest that wasn't far from him. It was on top of an ancient ruin,Bleak Falls Barrow. It took him several hours to climb the cliffs to get there. He then saw the dragon,eating the bandits and preying on trolos and other living beings.
He had to kill the beast. He had the power to do so,because,he was a warrior who bare the blood of dragons. He was the Dragonborn,as the lore calls him.
He took out his sword. A sword of a thousand souls of dragons slain by him. Dragons do not actually die,only loose their physical form. When they die,they return to Soulsheim to be reborn. But only the Dragonborn has the power to slay them forever, by absorbing their souls.
Then,the Dragonborn let out a shout to challeng3 the Dragon,and in a single slash,he cut its head off, absorbing its flesh and blood,its soul,and then he picked up the dragonite he long has awaited to get.
He came down to a farm of chickens,so he bought some chicken breasts and cooked them for consumption,then he rested at an inn. He unequipped his clothes, put themmin a cupboard,and went to sleep.
The next day,hos head long journey almost ended,as of because he reached the monastry of Vivec,alas,giving the dragonite as an offering to enter his world with his soul when he dies. The end.


Nici o greseala,im-i place prea mult engleza :c
spune-i ca te-a ajutat un prieten