Using the notes and the plan below, write a story entitled "A lucky Escape". Write about 120-150 words.
a) Paul was sitting in his garden.
b) He heard someone shouting for help.
c) His neigbour's house was on fire.
d) Paul called the fire brigade.
e) Paul brought a ladder to help his neighbour get down from the top beroom window.
f) The firefighters congratulated Paul.
Plan : Introduction :
Para 1 : set the scene ( who, where, when, what happened )
Main body :
Para 2,3 : describe the events which happened before the main event and the main event itself.
Conclusion :
Para 4 : consequences, people's feelings, comments.
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| A lucky escape |
There was a man named Paul. He was just playing with some toys in the garden. Suddenly, he heard a call for help.
He looked around, but didn't see anything. He went to investigate closer, and, his neighbours' house was on fire.
He rushed into his basement to grab a ladder, and went to help his neighbour. He positioned the ladder for his neighbour to climb down. Quickly, the fire brigade congratulated Paul. The neighbour was lucky he escaped, and thanked Paul with his life. The end.
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There was a man named Paul. He was just playing with some toys in the garden. Suddenly, he heard a call for help.
He looked around, but didn't see anything. He went to investigate closer, and, his neighbours' house was on fire.
He rushed into his basement to grab a ladder, and went to help his neighbour. He positioned the ladder for his neighbour to climb down. Quickly, the fire brigade congratulated Paul. The neighbour was lucky he escaped, and thanked Paul with his life. The end.
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