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Va rog ajutati-ma! Spune-mi unde am gresit și ce greșit va rog frumos.

My village with the shell fruits, flowers and vegetables of garden makes any person to stay here. In village we have two churches, four magazines, one sweatshop, one dispensary, one school and one police department.
Green pastures ,the gardens with flowers wich more beautiful bring a fairy tale and winds swinging chains on fields spending a pleasant smell.
Winter the village streets are full of the voices of children playing in the snow and in Christmas Eve and the New Year all going at wandering and filled homes with joy and warmth.
I hope we that might fulfill the words by Revoi Miklos :''Be your native land sacred. Strive to do honor, to be helpful. ''

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My village with the fruits, flowers and vegetables of garden makes any person to stay here. In village we have two churches, four magazines, one sweatshop, a dispensary, one school and one police department.Green pastures ,the gardens with flowers wich more beautiful bring a fairy tale and winds of chain on fields spending, a pleasant smell.Winter the village streets are full of the voices of children playing in the snow and in Christmas Eve and the New Year all going at wandering and filled homes with joy and warmth.I hope we that might fulfill the words by Revai Miklos :''Be your native land sacred. Strive to do honor, to be helpful. '' Asa e corect.. ai cateva greselute. <3 Coronitaaa?
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My village with the fruits, flowers and vegetables of garden makes any person to stay here. In village we have two churches, four magazines, one sweatshop, a dispensary, one school and one police department.Green pastures ,the gardens with flowers wich more beautiful bring a fairy tale and winds of chain on fields spending, a pleasant smell.Winter the village streets are full of the voices of children playing in the snow and in Christmas Eve and the New Year all going at wandering and filled homes with joy and warmth.I hope we that might fulfill the words by Revai Miklos :''Be your native land sacred. Strive to do honor, to be helpful. ''      I HOPE I CAN HELP YOU :)

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