Engleza, întrebare adresată de smile1, 9 ani în urmă

cine imi spune o compunere despre un oras mai fericit si mai sanatos  in engleza


ionteodora11: Te pot ajuta eu .Cum adica mai sanatos ?
smile1: sa se manance sanatos sa fie un stil de viata sanatos sa se faca miscare etc
ionteodora11: Stai putin sa ma gandesc ! :*
smile1: ok
ionteodora11: New York is the most populous city in the United States with a population of 8.175.133 people. New York exerts a significant impact upon global commerce, finance, media, art, fashion, research, technology, education, entertainment and is an important center for international affairs. This city is considered the cultural capital of the world. As many as 800 languages are spoken in New York .
ionteodora11: making it the most linguistically diverse city in the world, because there are many people from other countries, i need a city like New York .

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somewhere far away is a nice place, where people live a happier life and much healthier. all the way you see people being nice to each other, helping each other and smiling to each other. they live in decent houses and eat delicious food, a lot of vegetables and fruits. their meals have kind of an exotic look but in a good way, that mekes you want to never stop eating. And there is in their food something that you are not able to understand..it's like the food they are cooking is filled with love.

anyway, from what i have seen, the weather is also great, warm and a light sky, and you can feel the breeze in the mornings when you open your windows and take a good grief.

that it's a place where you would want to stay and live with your friends and loved ones. Too bad it was a dream.. :)

poate te inspira. :)


smile1: multumesc mult
irinateleoaca: 'grief' = durere; poate "breath"!
irinateleoaca: Minor correction: "That's a place where you..."
irinateleoaca: Final lines: "and the beloved ones..." e mai potrivit.
irinateleoaca: In the very beginning: "...far away, there is...." - subiect introductiv necesar.
irinateleoaca: "... smiling at each other". În rest, e ok şi frumos gândită.
Alli: :)) multumesc pentru corectari! :D:)
irinateleoaca: CP!
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